Mate wanted

Quest trots around, sniffing for a male wolf. She wishes for a male to be her mate, and to eventually even have pups with! Her tale wags at the thought. She wanted a mate to help her, she was barely making it on her own.

Ember a white wolf with ember coloured eyes stepped out of the mist and stared at Quest.

begins to wobble then falls because of scar then says " if you are wondering about the scar I was attacked by a dark brown wolf earlier and... I already said to much"!

She calms down. "Its ok. Im sorry." In her head she slaps herself, not all wolves are bad.

"Im Quest, by the way." She bows her head slightly. Her sky blue eyes with odd red and neon green streaks search his, looking for any signs of ill-intintion.

" I'm Ember and... I lost everything! The first thing i know is i'm with my brothers and sisters then something in the form of a dark brown wolf killed them and left this scar down my side".

OOC: Whitewolfquestlover09 and white wolf. I welcome you to FNI but you need to stop and read our rules page. Also Whitewolfquestlover09 I have sent you a pm explaining this to you already. We already have established packs on our forum. They are currently the only packs that are allowed at this time. I am sure one of the other packs would be more than welcoming to you both or you can RP as a loner pair. Again please read our rules page. Thank you. ~Fossy

Fossy, I read what you said but I am new here and don't understand what you said. Can you try to explain in a easier way? - White wolf

Please read our rules HERE: https://fniwp.rpg-board.net/t7-the-rules-must-read

OOC: Whitewolf- I've been getting mixed up with your characters and the other most recent newcomers, but I think the only thing right now I notice about you are very short posts- the first rule on the link Fossy provided. We'd also like to see more than just dialogue, even if you're making a simple reply. Check out some of the posts in the pack forums for examples of being descriptive. I'd say your in-character posts should be... roughly the length of this paragraph if not longer.

None of us are saying to start doing this immediately. Stuff like this is a gradual process, and we'll help you out if you want. It'll make roleplaying a more enjoyable experience for you and everyone who's roleplaying with you, because the more descriptive you are, the more we get to know your wolf.

Hope I'm not coming across badly to anyone, as I don't mean to.

A tingling sensation went thorough ember. He had never had anyone be so nice to him before. And for the first time ever he smiled! "Quest" he said " you are the first ever to be kind to me other then my family and I am truly grateful".

Quest blushes. "Im glad to help Ember. Your actualley the only wolf thats been nice to me except my family." Her voice is slightly muffled by the fur around the scar. She turns her head and sneezes before going back to cleaning.



OOC: Happy Thanksgiving!

Suddenly Ember turned his head and stared at something in the thick flowing mist. It was as if there was something invisible out there and soon his ember colored eyes grew into a blazing fire of shock as he stood frozen, tail tucked and ears back as his eyes still stared straight at the figure that seemed only he could see.

Out of the mist came a brown wolf! Ember jumped over Quest to protect her and the brown wolf began to growl. " Duststorm" said Ember " Ember" said Duststorm. The 2 growled and circled each other. " Leave us alone" said Ember " you already did a horrible thing now don't do another"! " But I am not Duststorm" said what Ember thought was Duststorm. " I am your father"! " Father"? said Ember. " Yes" said Ember's so called father " and you are the next to die"! Ember could see foam coming from his so called father's mouth. " your not my father you are a wolf who is rabid and thinks your my father"! The brown wolf paused as if he didn't know what to say then he ran away whining.

OOC: Guys... I think I posted this on one of your other boards, but you cannot have a wolf in two places at once. I'm not aware if you were already warned of this over PM or not. I've waited to see when you're posting, and both Quest and Ember are being posted on the mate search and lone land boards. This is a realistic roleplay. Unless you can think of other solutions (or the moderators comment on this), make the wolves completely different on one thread- including name, past, etc- or abandon one of the threads.

ok, sorry akkanatrum I didn't really know but how am i supposed to fix this?

OOC: I'm not clear on what you are roleplaying in both boards, but I also see a stranger brown wolf in common- almost as if the situations are very similar. I can't tell if the hostile wolf is the same due to lack of detail, but from what I'm gathering, the plots on both are similar.
As I said, one solution is for the least developed thread to be abandoned (like decide which one to stop posting on). That's the easiest solution I can think of. You both will have to collaborate on this one. You should PM (message) each other so you don't clog the thread with oocs

Ember smacks his head on the ground like he was very frustrated. " It's a long story but that wolf that you just saw was Duststorm. The brown wolf who killed my family. Yes he was rabid but it is easy to confuse a rabid wolf because their mind goes bonkers so he shouldn't be back".